through your windowed threshold,
loomed with the thoughtless threads,
covering a barren land, full of forgotten intent.
I am forever a lone window lurker,
of self righteous peeping tom foolery out on a night's walk.
my heart the covet wanter, taking a gander,
dipping my eyes to your life lived better.
close up and stumbling, crushing the tulips planted
and pricked skin stung on thorned
rose bushes pushed apart.
whispering, a crashed tripping and crackled smattering.
with stung lips,
quiet lines cracked across a glass gate.
and the sweat of my hands, and misted breath are left there,
printed on your window pane.
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a very late response to the weekly foliophoto, with the lovelies at bedsidesign and raincoast creative salon,
WOW YOUR WRITING IS SO AWESOME! IT REMINDED ME OF THAT SCENE IN THE TIME TRAVELLERS WIFE! XXX
ReplyDeleteJane! you are too much!
DeleteI haven't seen the movie but I am headed to the library with my youngest to check out the book. I haven't read it yet!
thanks for sweet comment. xxoo
So beautiful. Sending you warm blessings of joy and peace from across the world.
ReplyDeletethanks so much Sarah. xo
DeleteI always want to read your poetry out loud, to really savor the language. Your words just beg to be spoken.
ReplyDeletethanks so Emily. you are too sweet. xo
Deletei loved this!
ReplyDeletemy thoughts went to my childhood
driving with my parents
staring into the windows of houses we past by.
i am forever a lone window lurker - too.
: )
Thanks so Becky for your sweet comment! xo
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ReplyDeleteoh Lisa, thanks ever so much! xo
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